My essay coach


Expert college essay coaching for today’s students.

For many students applying to college or competing for scholarships, writing the essay is the last, and one of the most important steps in the application process. The essay is the best place to differentiate yourself – to describe your experiences in more detail, show your personality, and express your passion. And for some, it is not easy. I’m here to help.

Learn about our services

  • By tapping your unique voice through a structured brainstorm, and introducing you to a new writing process, we will identify your strongest essay themes. As your essay develops, we will work with you until you are happy with the final product.

  • You will create an outstanding essay reflecting your individual words and style. Your essay edits will include assistance with tone, sentence structure, word or character count, readability, and a final proof that you can include in your application.

  • $250. For this investment, you will receive a 90-minute individual strategy session, review of sample essays, writing tips, and selection of essay themes that meet your needs and position you for success. After our session, we will work with you by phone and shared documents to revise and finalize your essay and meet your deadlines. A maximum of 3 editing rounds is allowed. Additional rounds are $99/round of edits.

“My daughter thrived with her essay coach, who compassionately and expertly guided her through this process. What a relief.”

— Shannon L., parent, San Mateo High School



“Finding the right focus was tough for James, but Lori was a superior mentor in helping him find his voice.”

— Alexander G., physician and father, Ann Arbor Pioneer High School



About Lori

Lori is an experienced writer and editor. Known by many as a “red pen” expert, Lori has written numerous health care and issue communications, business strategies and grant proposals, and is the editor of a wellness magazine for 5 Healthy Towns Foundation where she coordinates community outreach.

As the mother of two grown children and aunt to over 30 nieces and nephews, Lori has helped hundreds of young people access their college dreams. She lives in Ann Arbor, MI with her husband Bruce, and they are both ardent fans of University of Michigan Athletics.

(Go Blue!)